Hi Nathan, You did a awesome job of your lizard report.I really like your facts.Maybe you could add some more writing in your slides.Besides that you did a great job. From Shea
Hi Nathan, Your slides were well decorated but maybe you should add some more information. I do know a little about them. Did you choose what animal or reptile to do a report on? Poppy
Kia ora Nathan, I like how you used subheadings to organize your topics about the lizard's prey and habitat. It's good to see that you didn't get carried away with fancy pants photos and GIFs. There was just a few slip-ups in punctuation and vocab. Overall, this was quite a good piece of work Nathan, thank you! From Charlie.
Hi Nathan, it's me Jamai and I just want to say that you are super smart when it comes to lizards. It was great, but as Charlie said,you need more help on punctuation and vocab. Do you know how long a chameleon is anyways? I look forward to reading more of your blogs.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Nathan,
ReplyDeleteYou did a awesome job of your lizard report.I really like your facts.Maybe you could add some more writing in your slides.Besides that you did a great job.
From Shea
Hi Nathan,
ReplyDeleteYour slides were well decorated but maybe you should add some more information. I do know a little about them. Did you choose what animal or reptile to do a report on?
Poppy
No I just did it on all lizards.I'll look into doing more info next time.
DeleteKia ora Nathan,
ReplyDeleteI like how you used subheadings to organize your topics about the lizard's prey and habitat. It's good to see that you didn't get carried away with fancy pants photos and GIFs. There was just a few slip-ups in punctuation and vocab.
Overall, this was quite a good piece of work Nathan, thank you!
From Charlie.
Hi Nathan, it's me Jamai and I just want to say that you are super smart when it comes to lizards. It was great, but as Charlie said,you need more help on punctuation and vocab. Do you know how long a chameleon is anyways? I look forward to reading more of your blogs.
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