Thursday, 15 August 2019

Holes task



This is one of my holes tasks. Holes is the book that we are reading in class, (it is really good.) This is a task for awer priorities. I need to wright a recipe for a formyoula. I made mine with a big combination of different fruits and I put them together. 

At the bottom of the page there is a pisher of a bottle.That is what it looks like.      

5 comments:

  1. I love your ingredients and instructions of how to make this, Nathan. You used precise verbs to tell me how to make it.
    You have been going above and beyond in your learning this week- keep it up!
    Next time you could work on your spelling- you could possibly use your Chromebook to help you with the spelling of tricky words.

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  2. Hi Nathan!
    I enjoyed reading your blogpost. It sounded like lots of fun creating your recipe, your picture looks super colourful. What kind of fruit did you use? Remember to check your spelling before you publish. Keep up your awesome work! :)

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  3. Hi Nathan it's Miriam,
    I loved reading your blog post about Holes. What is your favorite fruit? Mine is Rock Melon. What type of formula are you trying to make? Maybe next time you could check your spelling before you publish. You could also explain what your priorities are and write a little introduction so that people get an understanding of your work. Over all your blog post was really good. I am going to try that recipe out at home. Good work. Can't wait to read your next blog post.

    Miriam

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  4. kia ora Nathon.
    I enjoyed reading your blog post because it must be cool for your teacher knowing that you like the book your class is reading. The name reminds me of a move that I have watched holes, is it based on the movie, holes? You have added in so much detail you have even done paragraphs.

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